When you fetch the
diving toys,
you'll wanna use
"The Dolphin Dive".
You jump,
pump,
(extra)
spread your legs,
and dive!
It's so hard,
I could barley
surrvive.
When I did it
at first,
there was a
hive nearby.
I almost cried.
But I got the
diving toy,
so easey,
that I could
surrvive!
Author notes
this is for feching "dive toys", you know the toys you look for underwater and you fetch them.
Please tell me what you think
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i love it it's very talented...i hope you will write more for us all!most of us love your poetry!
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I love this so much. I knew this would be good because of the other poems you wrote. How do you think so good? I wish I was like you alot
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awesome
i have some dive toys, one time i got like 20 of them in on breath, it was hard though. I like the rhyme keep up all your good work can't wait to see more!
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sweet! and thanks for the 9 points!!!!
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COoL!!!!!
I will try at my pool I haven't done it yet *embarresed*
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