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[ Extreme contradictions howling ]

Extreme contradictions howling
in lycanthropic silver soul,
growling to release playful
powerful restraint of Self.

Passionate hungry needs fulfilled
in ice blue depths and shadows.
Mistress of the inner child
hidden in the abyss of the mind.

Stubborn mellow sweet witch
crafting balance in the heart
of spiritual veils and valleys.
Casting spells on her lovers.

Submit to the will of mental
psychological promise of Self
discovering expressed freedom
in hunting down the darkness. 


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Hematite Reflections reveals a lot more of me.

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  • ckwriter69
    August 20, 2007
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    nicely done, says a lot about who you are. Thanks for sharing good luck in the challenges


  • xXx W1ck3D xXx
    August 18, 2007

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    Very nicely done... I really like the use of description that you use with your words. It paints such a wonderful picture for the reader.

    Thank you for entering... I am very glad you are here.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 13, 2007

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    I like the flow you have with these words, makes one think and that inner child wants some outside fun that it needs a Mistress to control it.


  • indomitable
    August 13, 2007

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    rawr! i adore this, very beautifuly worded, flows well, and has many possible meanings. my favorite sort of poem.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    August 13, 2007

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    Mistress of the inner child

    I like that line...kinda gives the playful impression.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • Celticmoon
    August 12, 2007

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    I think this definately fits you and even hints at me But that would be expected from twins Perfect intro sis!

    Love ya!
    Bel

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