[ as i look into your face ]

as i look into your face
i know i can't be wrong
feelings don't lie
not like the lips
of a mouth so sweet
the touch of your skin
the sound of your voice
the look in your eyes
shows shades of truth

wanting you more and more

knowing this is a forbiddien love

looking forward to the day

i can really call you mine

i love you from afar

wishing you could see

all i'm willing to do

just to be your girl

untill then i'll just dream

about the day you call me your girl

A contest entry

make LOVE to ME!!!! by Nephalaneous lover. 669 points, ended August 27, 2007, 21 entries
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I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx. 450 points, ended September 10, 2007, 20 entries
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LadyDementia
September 9, 2007
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very good write, good luck!
xCandieKissesx
September 8, 2007

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Aww! So touching and sweet. I like how you used a different unique thing to your poem. It brought out wonderous work. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥
Nephalaneous lover
August 27, 2007
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awww, so sweet, the longing alone is beautiful as is this poem
my love is 4real
August 15, 2007
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this is for my love