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Please Don't Go!!!

Why are you leaving me?
Why can't you stay?
Not for a month!Not for a day!
But for a lifetime
I want you here with me
Please don't go!

You didn't change me
You simply allowed me to see
To see who I really am
Around you I did things I never did before
And now you're walking right out the door
Please I'm begging you not to go!

I'm nothing without you
I can't function right
I'm sad, depressed and hurt
Please, please don't go!

I want you right beside me
I want to feel the warmth of your hugs
I need your cheerful behaviour
Please I'm crying don't go!

I don't want our time to end
I want you to stay
I need to see your face
And hear your voice
I'm on my knees
Face to the floor
Begging you
Please, please don't go!

Don't go! Don't go!
Please for me
Please don't go!

Author notes

I just wrote what I felt!Someone I loved was moving out of the country....and I cried for 4hrs!

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  • grey hearted dude
    November 10, 2007

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    this poem brings back so many memories.It is by far what love feels like,for someone 2 put this in such words..whoever this is!!u r the greatest


  • Lord Dracon
    August 13, 2007

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    You did a beautiful job displaying the love felt towards the person leaving, very emotional and pleasant poem to read.