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Sunrise



the music


the muse



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ocean breeze

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 31, 2007

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    it is a bit like that isn't it...music is definately a muse to me as lyrics to songs inspire things within me that i didn't know I felt or thought of, it's very interesting... I like the way its short but gets a point across nicely.


  • katie-jo
    August 21, 2007

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    I love the things you address the sun as. It makes me think of something to look forward to in the morning! Great write. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 20, 2007

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    If that does not sum it all up under the sun, well done imagery within your imagination. Thanks for sharing.....all the best..

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver


  • waydownuponjoy
    August 18, 2007
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    such few words

    ... that produced a billion rememberances for me! Loved it! joy'_


  • Zephyr Aryn
    August 14, 2007
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    Interesting poem. It's very short, yet concise.


  • Swan song gold member
    August 12, 2007
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    Yes!!!!


  • HaleyMary
    August 12, 2007

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    Beautiful write. It made me think of nature and life and how if the sun never rose in the morning, no-one would probably ever get up to write something. Keep writing.

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