the music
the muse
Author notes
ocean breeze
In a list
A contest entry
- Five Lines or Less by katie-jo.
550 points, ended August 21, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 25 Words Or Less - Prewrites Allowed!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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it is a bit like that isn't it...music is definately a muse to me as lyrics to songs inspire things within me that i didn't know I felt or thought of, it's very interesting... I like the way its short but gets a point across nicely.
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I love the things you address the sun as. It makes me think of something to look forward to in the morning! Great write. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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If that does not sum it all up under the sun, well done imagery within your imagination. Thanks for sharing.....all the best..
-Timothy aka poeticweaver -
such few words
... that produced a billion rememberances for me! Loved it! joy'_

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Interesting poem. It's very short, yet concise.
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Yes!!!!
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Beautiful write. It made me think of nature and life and how if the sun never rose in the morning, no-one would probably ever get up to write something. Keep writing.
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