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this is an experimental effort. I cannot seem to make it as large as I would like. Sort of blatant, rather than understated. I am either getting old or returning to my second child hood.
Thanks to the prodigious efforts of ArtFullyMe, Lute's rather odd poem is now somewhat larger and easier to read.
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This is extremely interesting. I love seeing new forms of art and poetry. I have to ask - have you read a book called 'The House of Leaves' by Mark Danielewski? If you haven't, I promise you will love it if you read it. Very interesting, indeed.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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What I really like about this, having read the words over and over for a bit, is that there IS cohesion in it.. I read from right to left, rather than left to right, and found myself saying, yes.... yes, where ARE all the atheists today? Are they the ones on the battle field? Seems not... Are they the ones spitting fire in the name of some something even they can't name? ...no.. it seems not.... and no, the old poets never mentioned that part did they? ..the hell, the fury, sure ....but ..how odd this thing, this though shalt not kill -- but thou can take an eye for an eye, metaphorically speaking, or one can take what one calls ones rightful due, in judgment...as long as one does to others, as one would have them do unto them...
where are all the atheists today.... I suspect they are sitting back ... trying to figure out how you pray to nothing .. if they realize one should, as things progress ...these days...
anyways....wanted to ramble on that...
love the angles.. in this..
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Crosswords
5 Across -- nearly dead evangelist on amphetamine sulphate.
Peace.
This purty good by the way.
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interesting
all spirituality is philosophy unless it's hallucination - and today that leads to white asylum rooms
in antiquity "insane" people were "considered touched by gods" and thanks to that we can extrapolate today (and call ourselves spiritual)
on what our dormant brain can not understand and it's considered miracle
for "sober" people
all philosophy is pseudo philosophy until others agree
every one convinced their opinions are right make good philosophers if they argument it with logic
irony is that there is no logic
when you have as cause a metaphor and its effect is common psychosis
so forget what you learn
play with it in the sand or on paper
you found out the essential anyways
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I stand by my original statement. Cool.
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strange..... but hey, i am strange, bitter and twisted so it works with me
lololol
are you brushing old friends behind you or are they coming up fast behing you??
and it is all weird with the hokeypokeypikey people who think they know philosophy
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