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Liquid Lies

She swims in liquid lies.
They keep her floating
above the surface
above the pain of reality
Every once in awhile,
her olympic swimmer body,
forgets a stroke
and she slips underneither
one of these times
I'm not going to save her
and one of these these times
I'm going to let her
drown in the lies
that so often save her
I'm going to let her go,
so maybe she could feel reality
just once
before shes gone

Author notes

I dunno... i thought of it while my lil sis swam in a pool I was quite angry at the time

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  • RedRoseSpiral
    August 12, 2007

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    Good job in capturing the disgust of the usual saver. I definitly know how it feels to want someone to see what the lies they tell are really like for those the lies effect.