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Wings of praise

Butterfly flaps brightly coloured wings,
fluttering through the garden
seeking sustenance.
Open white petals invite,
yellow stamens beckon with life giving nectar.
Alight gently, and feed,
wings open and close rhythmically, worshipfully,
Praising the Creator for the gift of life.

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  • Tarja
    November 14, 2007

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    This was a lovely piece, however I was unable to enjoy it all that much. It was a little to short and though the imagery was great but for some reason this really didn't do it for me. Sorry.


  • Samplette gold member
    August 16, 2007
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    A nice write. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam