Another Angel taken after a two week fight,
This strong person full of life went into the light,
My Bestest Friend & Sister went to be in peace,
If only it was simple to just let go & release,
But this isn't so easy when you have a sister like Vicki,
All I want is to see her & for her to be right here with me,
My Angel with our dads, mine that I miss dear,
Everytime I think of her death I draw away this tear,
I Love You My Sweet Vicki, Please save a me a place,
For when it is my turn to go up there in that amazing grace,
I want to beside you as well with Megan & my dad,
For when that day comes, no longer will I be forever sad.
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Written September 11th, 2003
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Five Star***** Triple A+++plus
That is a perfect analogy or metaphor for Vicki and Megan and Your dad to be saving you a place while you finish something important you have to do right here....LIVE not only for you but live enough for them and you too. I love your graphic...e-mail me how you did that...K.
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A beautiful write...i can see glimmers of hope here, I really hope that you can find happiness here soon, just remember that your angels are always with you and are forever in your heart
Much love to you
~blue ~
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Just beautiful hon!! I see the sadness, but I also see some hope in this. It feels as though you are turning a corner on your sadness. Please keep going towards the rainbows, you will find them soon.
Your BIGGEST fan and AP friend,
~~Mary Anne~~
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This is a really beautiful peice.. I like the picture you have chosen to go with it.
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i find this poem cute .. maybe most of ppl will wonder on my saying so because of ur lines
"For when it is my turn to go up there in that amazing grace,
I want to beside you as well with Megan & my dad"
but still i find it cute u know y
coz it gave me a feeling that these two lines mean that u want to join them but only after when u'll have lived to the fullest...
i mean not any sooner .. like after u r done with ur schools graduations weddings children grandchildren then after u r done with that all u can join them and have fun over there in second world too
i loved this poem
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sucha beautiful and touching write Rose...second last line could use the word "be" in it hehe...thats the only mistake i see...keep the meory alive and they will never leave you and you can have them with you until the day you are no longer forever sad
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