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nowhere land






Never did i think my path would stray and get lost in you.
I watched it happen, willingly trod each step into nowhere land.
To feel again ... my heart ... my body ... and soul.
And got lost ... in its imbalance.









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ahh, what experiences of life give us our growth which we willingly fall into hmmmm such an imbalance within myself - emotions Vs ones direction in life ... one knows - yet allows ... time to re balance - yet knowing I've let go .... hurts

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  • PersuingHappyness
    October 20, 2007
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    JUDGED

    This is very nice... I love the symbolizm that it has it, it was a delight to read... The structure of the poem is a lot different than a lot of the ones that I have got in this contest. I think that it did it a lot of justic. thank you so much for enetering my contest....


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    Different from the usual loss writes I have read. I love the simplicity of it, very well written. Best of luck in the contest!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 19, 2007

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    Letting go always hurts! Even if we know it's not right for us!

    This was great... so much said in a few wonderfully chosen words!

    I'm going to read more of your stuff!


  • Arizona Sunset
    September 5, 2007

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    life does unbalance us, and when we willing trod, it becomes a learning experience. Nice write, thank you for sharing


  • Sonja
    August 13, 2007

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    welcome back with your poetry. This poem is a one of kind to make us to ponder about imbalance...mostly is not easy to come back. you did it the best way.


  • tomisb silver member
    August 12, 2007

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    Every moment is a glistening gift but passing to the next. Should we not watch the flower that blooms only for a day because it is empty of joy for the next 364. Should we not feast on this moment. Refuse to not play in the sun while it shines. Celebrate and mourn, be at peace and full of wonder as the day moves on. Confusion is often created because we want to avoid all the endings and life moves on. I loved the piece, very clear and honest and so true in a hundred areas of life.

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