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Trappings-collab with Cupcrazy

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What is this sound that titillates
these hairy depths of hunger?
That sends a scintillating heat
through swelling lobes of pink?

Familiar wing? O yes! And rest,
you worm, upon delicious finding!
Come sip of sweetness, leering,
but question not its inauspicious gaze.

tongue drips with salacious desire
yearning for fulfillment
scorching aches across dimpled flesh
leaving me breathlessly enflamed
for want of petals soft as wings

might I burrow in silky depths
to suckle stolen nectar with salivating lips
as eyes focus on virginity’s bud
bleeding red with ripeness
vines of lust seeping to wrap me tenderly
within lobed sanctuary?


Flit nearer, now,
into a realm unknown,
ignoring many voices swarming;  
but lay yourself upon alluring wedge.


Let hesitation’s hoards be silenced
for ecstasy awaits
when caution floats away on quiet winds

 

alighting, 

I feel your tremble under legs
rubbing roughly against your velvet
pulling me slowly forward with shyness
that belies the vixen tumultuously waiting

conquer you I will, making you shiver
as I slide between your silken folds
laying claim to your tasty virtue
devouring your essence with
voracious appetite


Snap!

 

Haha!


I have you now within constricting clutches
to have my pleasured feast upon your frightened form!
Oh, yes! Oh, yes, and heigtening yes!

Writhe and wriggle there within my wicked deep
and signal me to clasp you tighter still,
as septic juices envelop whole
your insignificant, little mass.
Seeping.
Dissolving.
Swallowing
every ounce of frothed audacity
that tiptoed through my luscious lair.

 

shivering pain of deception!
no virgin are you that shines
as Venus rising with legs
spread wide to trap by intent!

and now my blood pours
furiously upon that luscious flood
providing the luminous red
so needed to imitate the untouched

what fool was I to trust your
seeming naivety,
that bitter fuse
disguised by the flutter
of duplicitous guile?

with sadness now my life ebbs
drifting away with
eternal disgust
while you wait patiently yet again
to feed hungrily upon
the lust of mere mortal fools ...
 
 

Author notes

TASK: FLORA--use any species of flower as a metaphor for an issue in life we must overcome

Our piece shows the psychological workings and behavior of the Venus Flytrap (left aligned) interchanged with the thoughts and actions of her dragonfly prey (indented).

Life Issue - The folly of mankind using the interaction between male and female --for man often thinks to conquer all without assessing the danger, preferring to think himself invincible.

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  • Ryno
    November 5, 2007

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    Wow. See, its piece like this that make me feel very very bad about what happened to the Amazing Race This was an amazing, enchanting, metaphorical piece that went unnoticed. Very sorry Bunny and Ten. Great work though, I really enjoyed reading this.