Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

a flight

if i had a choice,
i would be a bird
a strong bird
that can fly away real far
and would never have to come back to my creepy reality

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • lindaburns gold member
    September 10, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    simple, heartfelt and answering a question I have no idea how I would answer myself. Write on.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 12, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you for your entry, Josephine


  • checkmate
    August 12, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Wow. Exactly how I feel. Four lines- and you described it perfectly!

    Best of luck in the contest!