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So In Love

Rainbows and gummy bears are a drift in my bed,
Unto dreamers at night I dream of in my head.

Humble unicorns fly home it seems to me,
That Carebears really do exist in the land of the free.

Parfumed flowers are falling over where I lay,
And wishing more and more of it each day.

I could feel the refreshing waterfall mists too,
As I remember a memory of something so true.

I could take pictures as though for hours and hours,
A remember that sweet distinct smell of you in our shower.

Teardrops and rainfalls seem so distant at night,
Not a lightning to scare me not in your love I freight.

You've left penned pieces of what I meant to you on our day,
I remember as though it were yesterday instead of 4 years ago at bay.

Your warm smile and that flavoured kiss that warmed my heart,
I know it meant forever and I will never ever let it part.

Through rainbows and rainfalls and all that comes with our love its true,
There's only one man I'll ever love dear and that indeed is you!

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Option 4: The blessing of Love and sharing it with the world (I think I touched on all options LOL in some way)

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  • Visual beauty

    Oh my God...I'm glad to see you're here...you've been missed...I'm surviving, but don't ask me how or why...How I'd wish that there actually was a pot of gold on the other side...I'll be happy in just finding love...for that is a reward, if & when it happens...beautifully written...smile brightly...hugs & love...David


  • Justplainwaynethen gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    this is a grand sweep across the universe of lovely cliches...! lol however, in your hands they do just what they were originally supposed to do... I also think this would be a great 'picture-book' piece (I already have a list myself of them...) I did turn one of my AP sister's pieces into a picture piece- though I added an ample amount of humor (which I think she didn't appreciate!)


  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 12, 2007

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    very pretty poem

    written from such deep hearts love and recollection. a love given so deeply that time or circumstances can't change that time or place in your heart . beautiful
    good luck