Between two lines,
I can't figure out the blanks.
Both lies?
I don't know which is fake.
I don't understand,
two sides, both seem right.
Made up?
I don't know what's true.
Are they lying?
Is everything I know lies?
Confusion.
I don't know what to believe.
Author notes
Option 1
About your or someone you know phobia or fears.
I fear about being lied to. Not something little like telling me you returned my pencil when you didn't, I mean about something huge. Something really important.
A contest entry
- ~ Phobia's and Fears ~ by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended August 17, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sorry for the long wait~ I'll promise to judge by tomorrow ~ I've been waiting on Dark to give me her two cents ~ She told me earlier~ but there were some additional poems submitted since then. I sent her a message... a few days ago~
If I don't hear from her by Friday I will close and judge then ~ Let me know if you have any problems waiting until then ....
Thanks
Mali -
Tis I think that is everyones fears.... Trust is a valuable gift and should be treasured. Nice write~ Thanks for entering and good luck.
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