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Pic 4, Daybreak Wanderer

Hooded veil conceal my eyes
Strolling flagrant through fresh dew.
Downtrodden spirit, deed's unknown
Menacing the dark lit gloom.
Harrowed vision of futures end
Damp wool cloak chilling the bone.
Fire encroaching depressions domain
Mounting assault hidden but known.
Fleeting glance at day break rays
Asleep I fall humbled and shamed.
Fixed mind spurning hope and fate
This shattered exsistance I feign.
Everyday a new light breaks
Chance to mend past mistakes.

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I think we can all relate to the daybreak wanderer.

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  • Twilight4Eternity
    August 12, 2007
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    I love how you used the picture, very well done, just the kind of writing I was hoping for. Thank you and goodluck in the contest.