Alice the judas,
the black fire
little luck,
out of joy
- omens
the girl,
tuesday saint
the lover of faces,
a good wrinkle,
under water birth
- perks
bell, blade, club,
a girl's companion
in the worlds jar.
a moment of odd war
million pieces paid
the undone virgin
come time,
spur Venus
She's the wallflower,
the virus
A contest entry
- word bank [should be hard] by the chase.
475 points, ended August 26, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Three Way Split -Gold, Silver, and Bronze by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended April 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very deserving of the silver shiny shine muffin ^^
Glad i stumbled upon this.
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Good write.
It's got a nice flow and it's very unique I think, and really interesting! Good Job!
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=) thank you so much, this is one of my personal favorites. I don't think I could write a poem this good ever again!
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Yes this one is very good!
I also really like hands though too! Those are probably my two favorites of your writes that I have read!
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Wow, word bank, thanks for your entries
lol
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nicely done... great flow
to this piece...
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You used quite a bit of words here, and it almost seems like you didn't even have a word bank, that's how well this flows. Thank you for entering :]
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Nice
Interesting indeed
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interesting pice. id like to know where u got the inspiration.
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