salted wound
burning fire
malicious words
engraved in the heart
no turning back
no desire
empty
cold and forlorn
torment
disgust
tired days
sleepless nights
lost love's dark days
fighting through the haze
wisely remembering
a hard lesson learned
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie PIF (10p x ?? m x ?? w) by Riftkin.
600 points, ended August 11, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Has a nice and thoughtful feel. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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Very good! This was rich with emotions and certainly reaching! Good luck in the contest!
~Tia
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lost love is a hard lesson to face and learn from.
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