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[ The blade, so sharp, ]

The blade, so sharp,
with its hooked teeth,

it cuts deep into my skin,
as it slowly scrapes through with blood gushing out,

there's blood on the bathroom floor,
as i walk out, blood drips off me,

as it comes from my wrists,
leaving a trail on the floor.

The feeling of cutting,
releases the pain,

All the bleeding.

Wishing i'd found a better way,
to release the pain.

I chose the better way,
By ending my miserable life,

for that was the only way i could stop the pain.
There's no other way.

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  • silencethequestion
    August 11, 2007
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    good write, and i can relate to this a lot. very powerful. i hope you can find another way.