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Sameeha My Baby Sister

My Baby sister is so cute,
So sweet
I can't bear without her
When she smiles,
she brings me joy

When she cries,
I cry in my heart
I can't bear to let her get hurt
Because I'll do anything,
Anything for her

Her name Sameeha
is Beautiful
and it means
Blessing of God
It also means
Best sister in the
Whole world
To me
But she is both

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  • PariAysel
    January 29, 2008
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    Sisters are indeed a blessing od God. It's such a cute poem.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Great poem and such love woven within . And the name here given and its meaning is wonderful indeed

  • abba12
    September 12, 2007

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    this is awesome hon, very well done. it seems like youre much older than you are here.

    Because I'll do anything,
    Anything for her

    awww thats so sweet. good work


  • BXs Finest
    August 30, 2007

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    WOW...and ur nine? :))

    awwwwwwwww....so adorable...i like this poem a lot....you should read it to her when she can understand it...but overall AMAZING WRITE....


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 18, 2007
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    Awww this is adorable! You did such a great job writing this and I'm sure she will love to read this so keep it for her Wonderfully written!


  • mystic-angel gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    This is beautiful. It flows really well. A good read. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Smile

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 11, 2007
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    great

    Sameeha sounds like a blessing of a sister. I feel the same way about my younger brother and sister. I love them more than anybody else in this whole world. They're a blessing from God. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
    Brian

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