Feelings of sadness, pain, and despair
Are forcing my mind and my soul to tear.
Feelings of happiness, safety, and love
Are guiding and purifying from above.
Why do I feel such a calm rage,
Why does my heart seem like a slow ripping page?
Fear is the answer, fear is no lie
Fear is the reason why we all die.
In my fear there is a light
Helping me overcome the fear of dark night.
The light is happiness, the light is joy,
The light is my soul in a dark alloy.
I feel like a prisoner in the unknown
With love, light, and happiness that is not shown.
All the answers are forbidden
To all the questions secretly hidden.
No matter how happy, no matter how bright,
I always feel a cold dark fright.
The fear is not real, the fear is not fake,
The fear is the sadness we always make.
It isn't bad, but it isn't good,
There is no reason why we should.
My emotions are always continuously mixed
And there is no possible way it can be fixed.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Emotions! by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended August 15, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OUR CHILDREN OF AP SPEAK OUT! 13 and younger only! by Sky Prince Ireland.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell me you feelings!!! by fire angel.
300 points, ended November 13, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This piece is filled with emotion and I love it! I could never rhyme like that so great job! I acually read it over and over and don't think I'm done yet.
~Eclipse~ -
Wow this is such a powerful emotion filled write, quite amazing for your age. Best of luck in the contest and keep up the great work
Bravo
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Wow, this poem was really good. It was both dark and light, happy and sad. It made me feel joy and sadness at the same time, the emotions were written well into the poem. The flow was excellent, and the rhythm was always great. Keep writing!
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Great piece
This is a great piece of writing.
I am sorry you feel all these dark emotions inside you.
I hope you will soon be feeling some more happier ones.
Your poetry is very good.
Keep writing.
Well done for this one.
Best of luck in the contest.
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emotional
Wow this is quite emotional. I'm sorry these kinds of feelings come over you sometimes but it can be better when we strive for it. YOu'll be okay. Anyway thanks for entering my contest. Good luck to you.
Brian -
A lovely piece. I really like it, there are some spelling errors here, might want to check those, but overall, great job!
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