Who am I?
Where do I belong?
I was told I am who I want to be.
What if I don't know?
What do I choose?
A confused girl all alone.
Cry's herslef to sleep.
What if I don't know?
What to do with my self?
Who are we to judge other's?
Why nust life be the way it is?
Who is going to change it?
That girl died that night.
Why? No-one knows.
She lost her soul.
Where did she end up?
Heaven or Hell?
Neither.
That girl is me.
Author notes
~Shugoryuu~
A contest entry
- You Know you Want To Do This Contest~ by Play Pretend..
385 points, ended September 20, 2007, 14 entries
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i think these are questions that we all have asked ourselves at one time or another. i want to thank you for sharing your talent with me tonight, to wish you luck in this contest you have entered and to say that i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Allright..
this poem is pretty good. it does ask alot of questions,
but it justs asks them and doesnt go into them more.
this is a good poem but not quite what i was looking for.
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you and me both this describes exactly how im feeling. I love the flow of this piece. I like the last stanza. nicely written and heart felt.
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