While I look at the stars I sigh
And ask myself why
I never knew the woman who brought me onto this earth
I guess to her I wasnt of much worth
I just wish she'd get out of my head
But she wont leave until I know if she's alive or dead
I think of her before I go to sleep at night
I think of how we may never reunite
But if the time we meet ever shall come
I hope that what she wanted for me is what I have become
A contest entry
- OUR CHILDREN OF AP SPEAK OUT! 13 and younger only! by Sky Prince Ireland.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
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nope not even close to what a loving family is thats why i miss my mom so much but i no that i wouldnt even be able to face her if i knew who she is because she would only be in her late 20's and i dont no if she grew up responsible or not you know
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I was most touched by your line "I just wish She'd get out of my head". Where ever she is I hope you are in her heart if not in her arms. Life does not always allow us to do what we wish, but what we must. Please give her the benifit of the doubt until proven otherwise. Someday you may meet. She may be thinking of you as much as you are of her. I hope you have a loving familyof your own.
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A very nice ending to this sad poem, loved it! Nice work
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A fine tribute to your mom. I don't think her giving you up had anything to do with you. I'm sure she thinks about you all the time and loves you very much.
Thanks for entering my contest.
Good luck.
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Nice
We always want our parents to be proud. Good write.
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