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watch you temper or who you go up to



  When you see her lake red hair, take a hint
just walk away, and you'll be safe
she has those blood red eyes, and if you still want to try
to talk to her, or just say hi,
you better run for your life afterward
because she'll kill you tonight

      she works at a late night club called Midnight
she usually works all night
and while she's at center of attention
that's just her job -remember that
she taunts and flirts, she schemes and plots
and yet nobody knows how to be a good friend
when she'll toss you in the end
she has no need for friends she says
she has no use for somebody to pretend
and then ditch her in the end
she's not that cold or heartless
just misunderstood, and hangs around
some people you wouldn't think is too amazing
if you found out what they did
they're mercenaries but who really cares
for the people that know them
they're so used to it
it's no big deal. But she's worse then their leader
when it comes to temper this is how it goes
if you don't already know

    she goes to Midnight when she's stressed or pissed
rather often i might add, but music is her cure
so you'll be glad for that later on
Andrew, a stuck up guy, walks up to her every night
and compliments her, and tries to make a move
she puts up with it usually, but this time that was it
he gripped her arm, pulling her back
as she tried to walk away, she turned to face him
"release me, before I lose it" she warned,
in which he ignored
She turned to be face to face with him
before he realized it, she had his wrist instead
she twisted it back, till there was a loud crack
she walked away with a warning to him
"don't mess with me and you're safe"

    This is Suna Ketsuma, she is the worst when it comes to temper, she the worst you see,
she's the baddest one of the mercenaries,
so if you don't believe me
challenge her and you'll see why

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  • nichtmich silver member
    August 13, 2007

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    Ingriguing

    Quite a story, is this a fictional character? Guess I can google and find out for myself. An interesting read, best wishes in the comp.