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do u no wut luv is

luv is crimsum blud tears f
                                      a
                                        ling 2 my brest
frum my throte were ur sharp!
teeth where press>>>
luv is giving UP my
                  hartbeet 2 u
butt now im ded & must bed u
                  adoo.


Author notes

edna i no u said ownly 4 lines & tihs cud b ownly 4 lines butt my artist in me neded 2 have teh freedum 2 crate & tihs is how i saw it so u ned to belief in me enuf 2 let me expres my self teh way it wuz ment 2 be exprest ok hun? TY 4 understandig ur teh best!!!11!!!eleventy-one!1!!111!

Lielack Mooon

o yah LUMPS OF DUNG rocks

LOL!

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    August 17, 2007
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    Sadly this is too near reality. Have you read some of the shite posted here?


  • knock
    August 11, 2007

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    if u iz dedded by luv (wiv a boddy) bighting yor kneck'
    theh gives u life...
    so it is possitive that u can wark teh erthe 4 heather'
    & bight sum boddy else if u wont..butt if u feal tyred u probbably wish u ant bean bighted in teh 1st plaice;
    & go rownd dissin uthers cos u kant sleighp rite

    • Lilac Moon silver member
      August 12, 2007
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      teh pome is sad b cuz i dye at teh end b cuz tahts wut luv is & i thin tahts caled ireny butt NEwayz ty 4 teh kind coment u roxxorz my soxxorz if i worn NE wich i dont b cuz wut youse r sox to a ded persun xoxo

      pee ess i cant slep butt its b cuz im ded


  • Blankscreen2222
    August 11, 2007
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    thiss is veRry rOmantik an PREshus pome.
    guD Lukk in the comPItishuN.

    • Lilac Moon silver member
      August 12, 2007
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      ty Blanky UR 2 kine i hop u have good luk 2 and u r sweat to say tihs is romancic ty ty


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    August 11, 2007
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    that iz gud an' you cn rite gude an' yu will win the czsontets but my pome is gode abowt Jesus.

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