Author notes
I put the poem as the background so it would work, does it look better than the other one? Please let me know
Option 4 - I think this fits into opposites
A contest entry
- Beautiful Tragedies - Options Contest by Moonlight Complex.
420 points, ended October 12, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Revival of The Cricket by B Chandler.
1500 points, ended December 29, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS!!!!!!!!! AND PREWRITES!!!!!!! by Ale E.
600 points, ended March 22, 2008, 32 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Opposite options...nealy anything goes! by know one.
650 points, ended April 6, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter your best poem by Shrouded in Mystery.
450 points, ended April 17, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Your notes are cover the last stanza ...
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I hope ...
that this is just whimsy and not something you've ever done.
Congrats on all those Golds.
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Leave a few spaces more in the *cough* poem
I swear I commented onthis before O.o
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This is excellent, because both columns are opposite from each other. It's really interesting. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a neat sort of contrast you've created here... This has obviously won 2 gold trophies for a reason! Oh, and I love the background! Anyway, thanks for entering, and well done!
Laura xxx
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AMAZING
exactly what I was looking for!!!
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thanks
I'm glad
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Wow This was very creative and nicely done. The rhyming was very good and this did not sound forced at all! Wow I complement you greatly. Nicely done my fellow poet!
Thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
ale xox
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Cricket. Please do not remove your entry.
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Cricket. Please do not remove your entry
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UNDER CONSIDERATION. Please leave your entry in for further discussion
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Good
God write and imagery. Good idea to comvine two in one. -
Don't get bummed cause I'm leaving a short comment, I'm just sick of leaving them by now. Summmed up I really liked it and thought it was creative and original.
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Sorry if I'm not meant to reply but thanks for your comment, I know what you mean lol.
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nicely conveyed... very eloquent
a wonderful display of talent and a near mastery of the English language... I like that this seems so anti- what would normally be portrayed, at least in my opinion... I think most would perceive demons as ruling the night and angels the day... this is beautifully composed... thank you for sharing this piece in my contest!
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Thank you for your comment and applause and I hope your muse returns soon!
Take care x
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Yes that does look very nice. Again, good luck in the contest and wonderful poem!
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This was a little weird honey.. Not something I would usually read.. But you did a nice job... The way the poems twist together while trully being two seperate pieces.. That was an unusual twist..
Great job.
-Danneh<
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