With her blossom peeled
of color and beauty,
she quivers,
breathless.
A contest entry
- closes sometime by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended August 11, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif - Enter your best quickie pre-write by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This says so much to me about love. Thank you so much
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oh wow.. in its stark simplicity, this poem is really powerful. such few words still make a strong impact. its so lovely. best of luck in the contest
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This is one of my favorites from you Mal.
It is really so delicate, pretty and simple all at once in a definitely breathless way!
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Hi Zayra
I've not seen you here lately...I must catch up Im sure you've written some new things I can sigh too....
for one of my favorite poetry queens..
Mal
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Sensual and loving. I love that in three lines you were able to make me sigh.
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Thanks Mel
big hug
mal
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So damn sensual for such a short write..
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Haven't read you in a while Mal. This is lovely. I just adore these short ones.
Hope you are well.
Crissy
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Hi Crissy
where been
Mal
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WOW again,you pen with passion for sure,keep that ink well filled ...PM
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Moons
Mal
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