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WhAt YoU dO

When I was in your arms
Thats where i found my comfort,
I would run to only you
Just because I have suffered.
Without your words
I would go highly insane.
Without your voice,
Its is nothing but absolute pain.
All of this pressure has  built,
And I think I may collapse.
Only when your here with me
Is hen I think I might last.
Even when you dont tell me
I am so sure I still know
No matter what happens
I wont ever be alone
You will always be ther
Even though at times it doesnt seem
Good night my baby
I will see you in my dreams.

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  • whiterabbit.
    August 14, 2007
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    I really like this and the ending is just so sweet. Great write, keep it up. =]