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Wipe Away Those Tears

 

 

Cry those tears my sweets
Because I’ll wipe them away
Mourn your hearts my dear
And I’ll hold you safe

I know its hurting
Though I’ve not been there before
I’ve been somewhere else
And loss always feels the same

Drift to sleep my darling
I’ll watch over you
I’ll make sure the nightmares don’t come
I’ll wipe away those tears.

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You are beautiful, inside and outside.

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For SweetxDestiny

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 14, 2007

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    Awww this is just so beautiful she is such a loving person and you have done a nice job with this thank you for your entry,Much love


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    October 14, 2007

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    This IS beautiful and she is a beautiful person inside and out! I love how you worded this and it nearly brought me to tears. Your a wonderful friend. Good luck and great job!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    October 13, 2007
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    oh baby... thankyou
    i luffles you so much


  • So Strange
    August 21, 2007

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    Yeah. Friendships are very important and great... something you should express feelings for. Great job here, Raven. I enjoyed this a lot because it was very deep and true, and had nice flow.

    Nicely done and keep on writing!

  • RockChick
    August 19, 2007

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    This was very, very heartfelt, Raven. I can definitely see where you're coming from. That's what REAL friends are for, though, isn't it? I know what you mean.

    Keep up the damn good work!


  • vampire.lust.death
    August 14, 2007
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    awwwww

    hmmmm it makes me feel warm i love that in a poim


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    Oh this is a beautiful write for someone who is in pain. What a wonderful friend you are
    Gaylene


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    August 11, 2007

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    It's almost like a suicide note but a comforting one. Maybe I'm just in that mood I don't really know.

    But very reassuring, great write. I'm sure SweetxDestiny will love it. And I see you made her/him cry... meany.

    You know what I mean.
    Me.


    • Ravenblood
      August 11, 2007
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      Yeah, i think your wacko, you know that right. and Sweet destiny is a female, not a male and not a shemale.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    August 11, 2007

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    Sweet Beauty :)

    This is opne helluva awesome poem here sis and I really love how soft worded and well penned it is. easy wwording that really flowe straight from your big soft heart right to comfort her in the time when she needed someone most. I do hope this poet really enjoyed the poem as I saw she said thank you and was teary eyed. I hope whatever may be going on that this poem will soon take comfort to the words from your heart and be alright in time. My well wishes to you both and keep up the good work for this poet also. Signed, Bro


  • Lady Australis silver member
    August 11, 2007
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    oh claire-anne
    thank you thankyou

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