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My Sweet Sister Wendy~

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Falling into the depths of nothingness
Where your love has faded away
Sorrows split your hollow heart within two
For heartbeats once entwined do sway

All those yesterdays of loving long nights
Kisses of betrayal anew
Shattered your soul sincere beyond repair
Until another soul loves you

I feel such agony within your words
Know there's a love to heal your soul
The kind divine where truth unfolds failures
Where some souls seep through hearts of coal

No-matter what thoughts overcome your mind
Know you are someone cherished here
All my love to mend your broken spirit
Know I'll always love you my dear


My Sweet Sister

Wendy~

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Much love I send my sweet sis Wendy, Bro Timothy~

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  • XXIHateThisPartXx
    August 14, 2007
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    thats a sweet write. she sounds like she's pretty lucky to have u


  • Desire gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Precious!!

    Beautifully penned Sweet Soul
    The Love pours from Your Heart also Your Pen~!
    Thank You for sharing from within

    I can certainly see this brought forth a
    HUGE smile
    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • poet2angels gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Such a beautiful and heartfelt write for our Sis...She is loved and you have said that so gracefully through your words....I know that this has touched her heart...TY Bro
    You are wonderful...

    Lynda


  • PoetsAngel
    August 11, 2007

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    What a beautiful dedication. you have such an eloquent way with words. Just lovely, made my cry


    Cathy
    ♥♥♥♥♥


  • PerfectImperfection
    August 11, 2007

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    Oh my dearest brother! Thank you so much! This is such a beautifully touching piece of hope you have penned me here. Thank you for your support - it means so much to me.
    This write was so on task, the wording - was painfully soothing...

    "All those yesterdays of loving long nights
    Kisses of betrayal anew"

    These lines most of all... Oh God how I love him! I just... Okay This should not be in a comment! That is as weepy as I will get. I am in the numbed, looney stage - trying to have a hopeful outlook as we speak. This meant the world to me.


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 11, 2007

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    my dearest so wonderfully touching and heartfelt words of love and care as always -You have a heart of gold honey as you share your thoughts so provokely - much love always and I pray Wendy finds peace in her time of separations and know that her friends in AP and such care xoxoxo


  • moon2u
    August 11, 2007
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    Aw, well I have to tell you
    this one made me cry.
    but because it touched me


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 11, 2007

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    Oh this is a very touching piece.
    Well done. What a sweet dedication.
    Well done.

    delila

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