The way glass shatters
how mosaics form
No, not virgin Mary
No intricate celtic design
Broken becomes soldered together
something different
something
more
or
less?
Colors shapes lines
thrown together or
perfectly placed
Broken hearts
Newborn souls
epiphanies
The way glass shatters
how mosaics form
Author notes
Option 10
A contest entry
- Have Fun! Be Creative! Be Inspired! by Ammon.
1800 points, ended September 17, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent! This was what I was looking for in this option. Enjoyable and made me think deeply. The only thing is grammer. You need commas big time in some areas, and the spacing wasn't very effective. I would say align this to the center. And in the third stanza, it would present a greater effect if you placed the lines as,
more or,
less?
Very good write though! Best of luck to you!
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