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Domain

Domain
Land that we own
Houses, castles, and serfs
Grand fields with seeds we have sown
People who manage and care for our turf
There's much to do and naught to gain
We struggle for our life
To keep our own
Domain

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My first attempt at one of these...hope it works...

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    August 21, 2007

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    Well done on a great rictameter you have written this very well

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck

    Karen