Who has ever told
the age of seventy
is when one gets old
and can’t feel happy?
Age is a non factor,
just a false notion in head.
I’d like to see my mother
turns even to a hundred!
Winter, autumn and spring,
all have their beauties.
Each for us does bring
a basket full of joy release.
Blessed the day you’re born,
you brought lots of love & joy.
Just like the fresh air of morn
you offered the love we enjoy.
2007-08-11
A contest entry
- The Big 70 by catz.
1400 points, ended August 26, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
This is a good write...I enjoyed it...Especially theses lines: "Age is a non factor,
just a false notion in head.
I’d like to see my mother
turns even to a hundred!"
In Genesis, it is mentioned that Methuselah lived more than nine and a half centuries, he died at the tender age of 969...So if you are in your seventies, consider not yourself, but strive to live even longer...Once again I enjoyed this write...Peace
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Reflections of wisdom
Great advice. Are you Il Muse or Catz? Jolly good show. Happy 70! Kiss your kitties for me, o.k.? j Sorry, I misread your name Ir Muse? -
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Thank you for the comment. Yes, my new id is Ir.Muse. "Ir." stands for Iranian.
Shahrzad
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Thank you, Shahrzad for such a lovely birthday poem
I agree, age is in the mind of the beholder, and really, I don't feel a day over 29 
I love life, and I do plan on seeing that 100th birthday... at least
You're always such a joy, I'm glad we found each other on here
love and
Mom
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hello mama
Glad you loved it.
Happy Birthday again and again.
Shahrzad
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so now you post a poem on this reservation poem. This is really a nice birthday poem for our lovely catz! She will sure enjoy this one. And shahrzad, you always know how to bring smiles to other people’s lips. A great thing it is. Khoda hefzet kone ke in ghad khoobi. Dooset daram ye alame!!
And it’s ashamed that i can’t applaud your poem again
~Vernal Bloom~
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Well Shahrzad, You have written a lovely poem to honor your mom on here. You alweays think of others and make them feel blessed to know you. You take care, Sandy
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Thank you my dear auntie
Shahrzad
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Superb
It is always a pleasure for me to read your upbeat poems that inevitably turn out to be spellbinders!
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Thank you dear friend.
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This piece is such a beautiful birthday dedication to our mom, catz! It is so sweet and is picked with flowers from the heart that blossom through each word that I've read. Keep up the great work, good luck in the contest, and good job on this piece! I'm sure catz will love it!
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I tried sending you 5 stars some days ago, but the system was a little...lol...I sent them now.
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Thanks for letting me know. A heart-felt tribute. And certainly more appropriate to the moment that what I momentarily mistook for the poem. Keep writing.
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Thanks for coming back.
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Okay, it's just reserving the space, I suppose. But coming upon the page, with line 1 in boldface, just as if it were a title, followed by a 1-line poem...well, you know, it almost worked.
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Thank you dear friend, I've posted my poem now. If you like to read it, you're more than welcome.
Shahrzad
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Tehehe, I'll back to this reserved page again, too! And don't worry, you are not late for the birthday party
Write one of your wonderful poems for your mama Dee!
~Massy~
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lol...and what are you doing here?
Thank you for leaving the first comment, I'll try to come up with something niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee for mama.
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