i smiled at you and you turned away
my heart...it got torn today
although i see you in my dreams
i see you leaving me
why if we have always been together
now and forever...
time has ripped us apart
just as it ripped my heart
now why did you go and leave
baby tell me please
if we had sworn
to forever...
fate it can be cruel
when we break every rule
our parent
they told us it would only lead to pain
that pain it was for real
now my heart will not heal
you left me all alone
when you left from home
baby now i see
time took you away from me...
we thought we had all the time in the world
but eventually we moved on
you went to Harvard
i chose Julliard
we did then meet again
i was happy to see my friend
you came to my home one day
you and your fiance
and i saw that you were gone
time i knew had broke my heart
Author notes
soren20000 i am 26
A contest entry
- Time is Tearing me Away by thorlorn thanatos.
490 points, ended August 11, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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An interesting piece. I assume about two lovers being split up by different colleges?
Good luck in the contest
Ryan

