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[ i smiled at you and you turned away ]

i smiled at you and you turned away
my heart...it got torn today

although i see you in my dreams
i see you leaving me

why if we have always been together
now and forever...

time has ripped us apart
just as it ripped my heart

now why did you go and leave
baby tell me please

if we had sworn
to forever...

fate it can be cruel
when we break every rule

our parent
they told us it would only lead to pain

that pain it was for real
now my heart will not heal

you left me all alone
when you left from home

baby now i see
time took you away from me...

we thought we had all the time in the world
but eventually we moved on

you went to Harvard
i chose Julliard

we did then meet again
i was happy to see my friend

you came to my home one day
you and your fiance

and i saw that you were gone
time i knew had broke my heart


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soren20000 i am 26

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  • thorlorn thanatos
    August 11, 2007

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    An interesting piece. I assume about two lovers being split up by different colleges?

    Good luck in the contest

    Ryan