I give you peace I send you love
I cry tears today so you do not need too
I send you all my good thoughts
I take your bad
I take your pain along with mine
so for just a sweet sweet time you can breathe and be a normal girl
across the miles I send my mind not my heart is not so strong
my mind is strong I can carry us for a while I promise and my promises never lie.
your sister
Author notes
Rheea Ellis I read the rules option #8 the first friend I made on AP had to go off line she was not feeling well she was like a sister. To Karen
A contest entry
- Best friend inspired write! adult by Bedazzled-Angel27.
450 points, ended September 7, 2007, 10 entries
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*Crying*
I couldn't contain myself from crying half way through reading this. I am so very honored. That is the most precious thing!
"so for just a sweet sweet time you can breathe and be a normal girl"
We certainly do touch each other in ways that we don't even realize sometimes. I remember you ALWAYS being there for me nomatter what. It was your encouraging words that were waiting for me here at AP when I checked in during that time. Thank you for sticking with me through thick and thin, my sweet sister - friend. I love you!
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You could put this on a personal greeting card for your sister, it's lovely, it really is. A great expression of emotions.
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Very nice thoughts
Missing you. LULULULULU
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your sister...
Beautiful dedication to your friend. It shows the authors empathy and kind heart quite clearly... I'm sorry about your friend! Lovely poem...
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I like this one a lot. I have a step sister somewhere, I haven't found her yet. I love the following lines:
I send you all my good thoughts I take your bad I take your pain along with mine so for just a sweet sweet time you can breathe and be a normal girl across the miles
very strong emotions through out the poem. Great job. Keep up the good work. look forward to reading more of your work
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