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android dreams

Stiffly,
on a couch alone,
I sit.
The internal tick of my
mechanical heart
      (resting in the hollow cavity
                            of this metal shell)
matches beat with
the base-line of a song pounding
through the carpeted ground.
(spouted from auxiliary technology)
      It’s muffled words sound like a robot’s lullaby
            soothing my
mainframe mind whirling.
Fabricated eyes shut
and I dream of
mortality.


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  • heinzs silver member
    August 13, 2007
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    :-)

  • star wars fanatic
    August 11, 2007

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    Oh, what word choice! That was very nicely put together and very thought-provoking. I imagine some of us wish we were robots some days too. The grass is always greener... I guess.