I never got to know you,
so this is for you,
my first poem to you,
to you mom....
I was only three,
and grandma took care of me,
you were passed out at the bar,
to drunk to drive a car,
I'm happy whithout you,
from my heart I withdrew you,
I don't ever want to see you,
because I don't need you.
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my sister thought of 2 lines with me.
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Hey,
I was just feeling weird,
and decided to come and read this.
I love you.
You are the sister I wish I had.
Other than the fact that with me it was my dad that left,
we are so much alike.
i love you,
and i would die without you.
you dont even understand how much i am here for you.
i am the one who will be able to understand you
when noone else does,
i am the one away who can wash away some of your pain.
i love you. -
ohhhh page this is so sad im so sorry about that
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heyy
omg every time i read this poem i cry and i love it so much page u have are great at write poems -
words cannot explain
this is from taylor and me. i love ya, and words cannot explain how i relate to this poem. I practically cried. no one let alone a twelve year old should feel the pain that you feel. Your poems should be made into a book. i would read it so many times, every night. you are a truelly excellent writer, and you should really know that you word your poems so well. i love you, baby!
Remember we are here for you! every part of it was good.
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This is really touching and sad. Good write.
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Its touching
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this is a simple poem, but its a good poem. its full of raw emotion, and the line "from my heart i withdrew you" really stuck out to me. great write
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This would be a terrible situation it makes me want to cry. It's toooo good! If it's really true, then I'd say that you and your Grandma are the lucky ones. Mom is the one who missed out.
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wow amazing
i love it its so good!
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