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who am I

Hidden behind a mask buried deep in the closet
reveals the wonder I surpress inside.

Void of emotions to feed you your daily nutrients
silly games play hide and seek with the real me.

How can I tell you,
If I dont know myself?

Alone and isolated with inner secrets
a split tongue merges with a venomous bite.

A wall built to keep me in
forces you outside, holding you
a safe distance from figuring me out.

Soft spoken words laced in sugar and spice
float through translucent air
like fluffly clouds on a beautiful summer day.

A milky melodramtic tone keeps smiles on their faces
underneath the tough skin lingers an innocent child
timid to welcome anyone into her life.

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  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 10, 2007
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    An excellent write. Very good job. Thank you for your entry.
    Soulful Woman