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Create Your Life

When I was a little girl
I planned a life for me
As I stand and look at it
Everything's as it's supposed to be

I've a husband who's so good to me
Such love and understanding
He gives me everything he can
Not a bit demanding

I have two lovely girls
Gracie and theirs Carly
A better set of daughters
I doubt there ever could be

I'm living in a big brick house
The one I used to dream of
With a family I helped create
Surrounded by their sweet love

When I was a little girl
I planned this life for me
And as I stand and look at it
Everything's exactly as it should be

Author notes

I can remember talking to my mom when I was really young like 7or8yrs I told her I was gonna live in a big brick house in the country with a cute boy and have two girls, two dogs and two cats. Well here I am, kinda wierd, but, what's life without wierd.

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  • mommyof2
    August 13, 2007

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    Perfectly fit

    I'm so glad your childhood dreams came true! Writing about them is such a nice way to express how grateful you are to have such a great life. When I was a little girl, I wanted a cute hubby (not that looks matter, but these are words from me as a kid) Anyway, two kids one boy and one girl, and a cat. Well, all came true except for the cat, AND, living in Greece... Who would've ever thunk it?? Certainly not me. I'm blessed as well with such a loving family. I've written something similar using acrostic I'll post. Thanks for sharing. Michelle
    P.S. I hope you can see the *TEN* invisible applauds I'm giving you, since I don't have any yet.


  • slipperssun gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    this is awesome honey, i hope you always have the life you wanted and health with happiness... great write and good luck
    cheers
    Jen


    • AmyW
      August 11, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting. I think that we can create the life that we want by believeing that we deserve to have what we desire.HUGS


  • kennethlaney
    August 10, 2007

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    Very Good Poem

    That was really sweet and I'm glad that you've achieved your dreams! (there's for theirs in third paragraph)


  • StarEyes
    August 10, 2007

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    I would say you are one of the lucky ones! To have dreamed of such a life and now to be living it! How lucky is that!!!! What a great read this one is!

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