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You relevance

You were sitting to the right of me,
a bright glistening smile upon your warm face.
You told me that you'd never leave because you loved me; now and forever.
You made so many loving promises and tempted me in the ways of desire.

Until you said it was over and tossed me aside on the road.
The broken promises and the broken heart sitting on the side of the road, bleeding.
You killed me, inside and out..
I couldn't feel or even udder a cry of anguish.

Yet, you called me and wanted to be friends.
you told me you missed me and you thought of me...
that you loved me to this day and you need me;
but I can never have you in my arms because you were leaving.

To my friends you call me needy and selfish,
and to me you try to make me smile like nothing is wrong...
You lied to me over and over...
the innocents and the love I thought were real was just a dream.
Your friends never liked me and you...
You used me and pretended that we had a future.

I feel horrible inside because I am screaming for you touch...
but I know I am living in a lie and a f*cked up dream.
Go away and never come back; that is what needs to be said...
Everytime I see you though it is please come back!

Leave me here to rot, that's what you really want, isn't it?
I cannot please you and I never had...
you played me like a pawn in this big game they call life...
yet I was too blind and stupid to see that!

I love you still but my life is soon over
while you glimse over my hospital bed...
you hold me hand and I breath my last breath...
say my lsat words...
"I love you and I always will; yet, I hate you from this day on...
Good Bye......."

Author notes

-Option 3 (Options--Please Enter)
-I am still alive but he had killed off every feeling I have ever had...I hope this is easy to read and understand...-Write about a single moment in your life that has impacted and changed you forever. It could be in either a positive or negative way. Write about both the event and how it's shaped you. Poem 2!
-Twisted love, true love gone wrong. Something got in the way of the whole happily ever after part.

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  • LunaAmara
    September 2, 2007

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    this is an amazing write
    i understand exactly how you feel--i'm actually tearing up because this is sorta happening to me right now...
    good luck


  • CarCrashHumor
    September 1, 2007
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    is this about a mother or father?

    if not, why is it in my contest?


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 16, 2007
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    Some lies are just unbareable to hear, no matter how they come out...
    Sometimes knowing that the one you love never really did love you hurts more than never loving at all...
    Sometimes they say it's character building.
    I can relate to all, but it still hurts. Whichever scenario we speak of.


  • Memoirs of a Girl
    August 15, 2007
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    Very nice. I know just how this feels.
    Great write and thanks for entering!
    ~Memoirs


  • whiterabbit.
    August 11, 2007

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    This is really sad and it definitely has that feeling of reality to it and I'm sure so many can relate to parts. It's easy to see the pain and confusion here. Great write.

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