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Something I cant explain.

It is that feeling I have when she smiles at me.
The way I just know I can trust her and not be afraid.
How I can be myself and give her anything I want to.
It is how bad I need her when she isn't there.
The way she makes me feel when she is with me.
I know now I can never live with her,
Without her smile or without her love.

Please tell me what you think

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  • ScarletLetter
    August 15, 2007
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    you're making some girl very happy by these words

    great job hun

    much love and prayer
    ~*Jess*~


  • saseychik0688
    August 12, 2007
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    this is really good will, im happy to see your writing again


  • Scandalous Beauty
    August 11, 2007
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    Ahhh this is soo beautiful William!!!! It gave me a warm fizzily sensation as I read. I so want that in my life. In the second to last line, did you mean that you can never live with her? Or that you can't live without her? Great poem sweets!!!!!

    Guin


  • blueyez
    August 10, 2007

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    This is very very sweet and I'm glad you finally found the one you can be yourself around and be in love with dear sweet will