I was in group therapy the other day
So they told me to stand up and have my say
I said "Hello" and told them my name
And told them my addiction without any shame
They eyed me with a curious look
As if I was a theiving crook
One even went and said I didn't belong
But I told him he was very wrong
I said "This class is for addicts."
I don't see where the my story conflicts
Because I am in way over my head
This problem I am starting to dread
You see I can't eat nor can I sleep
Truth is I am in too deep
I can't be separated from my habit
Oh and how I "gotta" have it
I start to shiver and shake
And my senses awake
I know if I don't have it, I will die
No worries though I am in good supply
Then I smiled, "This feeling I can't get rid of."
"Hello everyone, I am addicted to LOVE."
Author notes
I don't know if its good but I tried! ☺
A contest entry
- Addicted to Change by requiempoet.
340 points, ended August 10, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Awesome!
This caught me by surprise!
Very well mastered at getting my attention, I too have an addiction, not that its as legal as this one. This is unique and kinda sweet at the same time, very well done my friend, very well indeed!
Then I smiled, "This feeling I can't get rid of."
"Hello everyone, I am addicted to LOVE."
I love that part!
Thanks for sharing!
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wow at first i was like what is this, but it is cute how you came up with this. thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
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ha ha ha love is addicting and it can be extremely dangerous!!! Good poem though, I liked how you used group therapy, made me chuckle.
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This poem is so awsome i just read it 4 more times. haha im a dweeb. seriously tho i really love this that is a great mind you've got there. nice work again and again good luck.
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This was to cute girl! Good luck in the contest! I LOVED this poem. just wanted to let you know that, and I am not sure but I think you are supposed to put tho not though but if I am wrong could you tell me because I need to know if I have been doing it wrong. haha. its something I have been trying to figure out myself.
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Ahaha. awesome.
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LOl...i liked that it was a different kinda ending well done.good try
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