First, I wish it's not over...
I miss your love and warm embrace.
But if it's truly over I wish for you,
safety, clarity, peace, serenity, hope and love.
If love ins't there when you need it,
keep searching and you'll find it!
I wish you would call me if you need someone to talk to,
so I can "save" you from stupidity.
I wish for your success,
and your accomplishments and triumph.
I wish that you'd be a good-friend,
and bless others with your radiant caring ablities and grace.
Second, wish you fare well,
fore college will start soon.
I wish you good luck and so much more!
Third, and lastly,
please remember me...
So many memories resting on our shoulders.
I WILL ALWAYS BE HERE FOR YOU...
GOODBYE MY LOVER AND FRIEND...TAKE CARE...
I love you...and good luck.
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Going in Blind
mom-Kim Reeves (DeepinRage)
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Comments
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A cute wish. I like how you write it in three parts.
There are a few spelling errors, perhaps you could run this through a spell check?
Thankyou and good luck in the contest!!
Ryan
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