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Endless summer

I know that summer has almost ended,
But its not like any of us ever pretended.
The long summer days would be right where we sat.
Summer has almost ended, I know that.

I dread it, the school, that new place
So very very new and has so much space
There, finally, I managed, I said it!
The school, that new place, I dread it.

I just wish that the days could never, never end, Ya know?
Cuz we have so much fun sleeping in and so.
We would party and emails would send.
Ya know, I just wish that the days could never, never end.

I feel so restless, entering that seventh grade room
And experiencing new people. Its like a colourful moon.
Now, this summer has definitely been the bestest.
Entering that seventh grade room, I feel restless.

Yes, I am a seventh grader, writing this poem
I am amazed at my work, all of my own
Now i bid you farewell, for I must bader
Writig this poem, yes, I am a seventh grader.

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  • MorningMist
    April 29, 2008

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    Oh yeah

    I personally didn't like this poem much... so yes, i can criticize myself. visit my new user at: MorningMist

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 10, 2007

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    All I can say is I wish you well in seventh grade.
    And don't worry; summer will be back again before you know it. Just try not to count the days. I know, easier said than done. Anyway good poem.
    Brian


  • Little Mohawk Dude
    August 10, 2007
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    Hmph!

    I tried my hardest AND yes i see the mistake up there ^
    BUT oh well I'll try to fixy it