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Destroyed...

      

        Working to end this deceitful infatuation,

                                    Of false loves manipulation

                      As blood seeps out my veins, 

                                          Shimmering vial fragmented.

                            He only desires to force anguish,

 

                                                    Like he did to me years before.
                                                                                                          

I only long....

 

                      To one day...

 

                                               Save you.

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  • drownedindarkness
    October 20, 2007
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    I love your poems so much raven.


  • eyes2see-wrds2speak
    August 26, 2007
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    this one is good...i wish i could see the picture..


  • IFeedFromHisKiss
    August 16, 2007

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    wow
    i loved this poem
    its just like these words wre meant to be put together or something like thatLOL


  • Naridill
    August 11, 2007

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    Very beautiful thoughts, I like the idea of the two men, I know you didn't mean it like that but it is a male in picture. And when read with different views, your poem could mean alot, nice play on words.
    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • Ignis Corpus
    August 10, 2007

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    wow this is good, hrm PINK ELEPHANT! lol did you tell him i said hi yet? and i with you the best of luck in the contest

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