Dreaming
of only you
The sweetest of all songs
plays softly nearby as we dance
Slowly, so full of love for each other
Locking eyes, leaning in, kissing
Losing you so slowly
For I was just
Dreaming
Author notes
Well this was my first rictameter and I made it awhile back, but it was combinded with other poems so i add it here. It's not like it matter though because everyone elses poems are so beautiful and are of course, going to win. But I love poetry so...
A contest entry
- Form Contest - Rictameter by Seeking Peace.
750 points, ended August 21, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ahhh dreaming is the best, this is such a romantic piece, you have done a fine job on this form, I look forward to seeing more
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Karen
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