Dorje-dreaming in Druidian darkness,
seeking simple solutions
to fragile female faith
that grips here and now
as if it were forever
chant low
chant long
a sigh radiates
joins ancient anxiousness
for Cronish intervention.
Author notes
Wonderful to see the Dorje in the picture and realize I know exactly what it is.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired *10 entries only* by Naridill.
300 points, ended August 11, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautifully done and wonderful that you recognized it
The poem flows well and is nicely penned. My only confusion was the gender you picked for picture, when the picture is right there creates a little confusion but also could mean so much more.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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Man, I still can not see the gender issue.... no matter how I look at it....but, since I saw female, I wrote female...
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Yeh, everyone wrote of a female on non-genderalized. It didn't bother me, was just letting everyone know
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"fragile female faith
that grips here and now
as if it were forever"
Our strength lies in our fragility, I think. Your strength is inspiring, my Friend. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. 
Wanda
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Aho my friend ho''nehe,
My heart is eaahtomone to the motseeoeve you prescribe to us with these lines.
Nia'ish my friend.
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Sigh~
Such wonderful beauty and alliteration in this piece....
IN so few words you leave us in awe..
Lynda
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