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~~No Escape~~

There was none this time
It was just me and the truth of my life
It’s cold where I am
It’s too dark to see
No escape
No way out
This magic tricking me
This magic shows how much one love can hurt
How much one life cannot heal
Never to return again


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  • Naridill gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Very beautifully written, it flows well and has a peaceful yet sad feel to it. I thought the ending could have had a little more ooomph but it is nice and smooth the way it is.
    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.