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To You From Me...

for months we spoke

and I revealed to you

my thoughts

 

you never judged me

but only listened

and always wanted to help

 

you were in my corner;

My anchor from drifting

farther away

 

you made me see

no matter how hard it is

never give up...Fight...

 

for I am worthy;

someone who has desires,

wants and dreams

 

it's hard to start over

but just for you

I will give it a try

 

so on that note

before I begin

to cry

 

I wish you all the best

and thank you for helping me cope

with the never ending challenges of my life

Author notes

this was written from my heart for my therapist Dr. Riley

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  • penman gold member
    October 12, 2007
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    Powerful

    It touches the heart and one can feel the intensity. Very well done.


  • Endeavor gold member
    September 4, 2007
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    Good Girl

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  • Endeavor gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    Excellent

    you made me see
    no matter how hard it is
    never give up...Fight...
    for I am worthy;
    someone who has desires,
    wants and dreams

    Wonderfull verse

    You did well to make these words

    You made it happen

    Proud of you

    Rick

  • hurtgurl
    August 10, 2007
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    Wow powerful piece here very moving and emotional.