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Nothing

Stare deep into my eyes -
The sparks of light
you see -
A broken reflection
of yourself.

Pieces, shards
collected over time
that I attempt to
reconnect -

so I can connect
with you.
You, who emanate
what you expect.

And you are comfortable
around me
Because you like
what you see -

My mask is a mirror
and I am
NOTHING
without it.

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  • Lord Dracon
    August 10, 2007

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    Absolutely stunning, nice structure and flow, enjoyed reading, thank you for sharing your beautiful words!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 10, 2007
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    Very intriguing write. I liked this. Thank you for your entry.
    Soulful Woman