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Shine With Brilliance

A glowing vessel.

Miles from sea,
  Far from home,
As it travels.

A shimmering brilliance.

Burning torrents
  Of sun-inspired photons,
Sway softly in their
  Illuminated path.

The casted shadows,

Bask in cold existence.
  As the light
Flutters past.
  If only for a second.

The wayward watcher,

Catches the reverence,
  With a simple snap,
From a cheap camera.

Thus releasing one more glowing vessel.

 

Miles from sea,

  Far from home.

Author notes

I normally stay away from this style so please feel free to disqualify me if you want to, I'll understand.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 10, 2007

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    A glowing vessel.

    Miles from sea,
    Far from home,
    As it travels.


    with hope that it can return


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 10, 2007

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    "A shimmering brilliance.

    Burning torrents
    Of sun-inspired photons,
    Sway softly in their
    Illuminated path."

    No, not weird at all, Poet. An intriguing view from the given prompt. Congratulations on the bronze. Wanda


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 10, 2007

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    Awesome presentation for this topic...as well..."sun-inspired photons..." loved that, especially... ty so much for entering...